ext_13227 ([identity profile] nevacaruso.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ellerkay 2012-07-20 12:18 pm (UTC)

Hey, so, apparently no beta-reading job is perfect, because you forgot the closing quote marks here:

He tapped Jim’s temple. “I’ve seen you.

Other than that, I really like your revisions, and this pairing is still hot and terrifying and scrumptious. I'm proud to have been a part of something so very awesome! <33333
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