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2011-09-04 12:38 am (UTC)
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You have the characterization perfect.
And the "Yes, and then what happens?" feeling at the end is quite strong, which I'm told is something good for authors.
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And the "Yes, and then what happens?" feeling at the end is quite strong, which I'm told is something good for authors.